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Open Question: what do you think of this story?

29 July 2010, 12:31 pm

ok, i love to write storys, i hope one day, i will be an author, i just want to know wat you think of this. PLEASE BE HONEST! It was a dark, scary, rainy night on February 10th. there was a young girl, she was 14 years old, her name was Kerrin. Now there's one thing you should know about Kerrin, she seemed like a normal girl on the outside, but on the inside, she most definitely wasn't. on the outside, she was happy, loved to smile, she was pretty, many girls looked up to her. Kerrin, didn't know that she was really in a lot of danger, she didn't know that she was depressed on the inside, and so Kerrin got so tangled up in being gorgeous, she didn't know someone was watching her, watching her very closely, maybe a little too closely. If Kerrin knew about this person, she would have payed a little more attention to her surroundings. Anyway, Kerrin was into art, she really loved, it. she went to a small school, in Fishers, Indiana, so she stayed after for art club, art club lasted until 5:30 P.M. When it was over, she walked home, she started walking with two of her best friends, Harley, who she has a major crush on, and Brigdet, who she's known since elementary school. Harley and Brigdet, had to turn, left and Kerrin had to turn right. Now it's starting to get dark, and Kerrin had no phone to call her parents and let them know she was ok. It's almost 9:00 P.M. and her parents are starting to worry. they figure she when and did something with Brigdet, and Harley, so they call Brigdet first, and Brigdet, says no she turned, and she hasn't seen Kerrin since they were walking home, at 7:30. Then they tried to call Harley, he said the same as Brigdet. It's now almost 10:00 and they are really worried, so they decide to call the police, and give them a missing persons notice. The police came straight over to their house. Her parents have three other children, two younger, one older. Her older sister, is really worried. her two younger brothers were only 4, and didn't understand what was going on. The police investigated for 3 days, then they started to realize that Harley has been acting strange, lately, and seemed defensive, on the phone when they asked, if he was with her. Harley becomes a suspect, for Kerrin's disappearance. The police, search Harley's house, they search everywhere near his house, and everywhere that Harley goes. They find nothing. after 4 weeks of the big Kerrin search, her mother goes crazy, then 3 days later passes away because of a sickness. Kerrin was still nowhere to be found, and Harley was no longer a suspect, the police finally realized, he was acting this way, because he was secretly in love with her. Their next suspect was the art teacher, Mrs. Mcoouny. She had nothing to do with her disappearance. The police continue searching, but they are no longer looking for an alive, healthy young happy girl, they are now searching, for a little dead girl. They look, in the woods, in dumpsters, in ditches, in sewers, everywhere, they could imagine, but this girl was nowhere to be found! They, start looking for suspects, but can't think of anyone that would have it out for Kerrin. it's been about 2 months and Kerrin, is still missing, then, on April 12th, her dad was just sitting there, thinking about where she could be, and finally he thinks, she just rejected that boy! maybe he has it out for her! Delmar! He calls the police, and lets them know, the police investigated him, only to find he was innocent. one day, this young girl, was with her family, driving through this small town it was a dark night, she was sitting there, in the back of their minivan, and looked out her window. out of nowhere she shouted stop, and her dad screeched the brakes, and turned around to see what the problem was, she points out the window only to find a little dead girl laying there. Right away, her mom pulls out her cell phone to call the police, the police rush to the scene. When they get there, they discover, its Kerrin.. the police, calls Kerrin's dad, and he rushes to get there. Now you're wondering, who killed her? how'd she die? well, here's the thing, if you read the beginning on the inside, she was depressed, and someone was watching her. The person watching her, was herself, and she killed, herself, she was scared, and didn't feel like walking, and so she started to think, when she reached her inner self, and found, she didn't want to live, and when she came across this bridge she jumped. Now this bridge is named after her, and it's called Kerrin's spot, they say, if you drive past it on February 10th at 10:00 P.M. you can still see her jumping off the bridge and laying there. its called the little dead girl. thnx!... Read More »

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